Typically, When I Think About Miracles, I Compose.
woww this is so sweet.....
Thanks, Sreeja! :)
Your lines are so full of the vivid scent of reality ... they draw the readers in their own world ... you are an amazing writer ... love your posts :-)
WOW! You are being too kind, Amrit. But, really, thanks! That means a lot! :)
lingering... very nice
Thank you! :)
Very well done...short and crisp image ~
Thanks, Grace! :)
Very beautiful haiku with great meaning!
Thank you, Valli! :)
Wonderful ~ love the meaning of your words ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
Thanks a bunch, Carol! :)
Beautifully carved :)
Thanks, Simran! :)
loved it! keep it up!
Thanks, Sohini! :)
love the haiku
Thanks, Susan! :)
Thank you, Piphi! :)
from fresh floral to potpourri. life cycle. lovely.
Yes, Annie! Thanks! :)
p.s. I found the syllable error and fixed it. Thank you!
clean. crisp. precise. yet touching and deep. awesome!!
Thanks a bunch, Ritu! :)
the scent, and the memory of beauty lost......images are painted so well with such minimal words...
Thanks, Joanne! Glad you liked it. :)
I love the message of the poem. :-)
Thank you, Christine! :)
I don't think that there is a sense of loss as long as the fragrance lingers. Sometimes we are able to keep things alive just as long as we want to. I like the idealistic thought and the passion in this. :)
True, Archana! As long as the memories are alive in our hearts and we let the sparks speak to us, there is no such thing as loss. Thanks for appreciating. :)
It's the lingering part that we remember...My Forget-Me-Nots
Thanks, Madeleine! :)
Hi Vaishali! :)You would be happy to know I have composed a poem on your say on ''Forget -Me -Not'' theme. Thank you so much for the sweet suggestion :)Hope you like :)http://myfriendshipsimran.blogspot.in/2012/07/allusion-in-silence.html#.UBVQoLRo20s
Simran, it's nice of you to give me some credit of it. But really, I'm glad you worked on the suggestion. Keep writing, my friend! :)
Also, your poem is really romantic... like feelings of a lover written down on paper.
First time here,nice read.
Thanks, Gyanban! :)
Thanks, Judith! :)
Thank you, Gabrielle! :)
i loved it. :)
I'm glad! Thank you! :)
Wow! simply amazing!!
Thanks a lot, Aditya! :)
Well said :)
Thanks, Ghazala! :)
A beautiful thought, Vaishali.. and a lovely message in it as well.Perhaps, a little too much punctuation...? bloom withers sooner or later -scent lingerswould get a tone of reading to it perhaps.. reading the first two lines in one go, and concluding with the emphatic third :)Nothing taken from the beauty of your thought though.. as MMT says, it is the scent that lingers :)
Perhaps, yes! Got your point, Leo, and it makes sense. Thanks for the suggestion... does me good! I'm here to learn and it's always good to have seniors give constructive feedback. Thanks! :)
Thanks, Katy! :)