Your lines are so full of the vivid scent of reality ... they draw the readers in their own world ... you are an amazing writer ... love your posts :-)
I don't think that there is a sense of loss as long as the fragrance lingers. Sometimes we are able to keep things alive just as long as we want to. I like the idealistic thought and the passion in this. :)
True, Archana! As long as the memories are alive in our hearts and we let the sparks speak to us, there is no such thing as loss. Thanks for appreciating. :)
Hi Vaishali! :) You would be happy to know I have composed a poem on your say on ''Forget -Me -Not'' theme. Thank you so much for the sweet suggestion :)
Hope you like :) http://myfriendshipsimran.blogspot.in/2012/07/allusion-in-silence.html#.UBVQoLRo20s
Perhaps, yes! Got your point, Leo, and it makes sense. Thanks for the suggestion... does me good! I'm here to learn and it's always good to have seniors give constructive feedback. Thanks! :)
woww this is so sweet.....
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sreeja! :)
DeleteYour lines are so full of the vivid scent of reality ... they draw the readers in their own world ... you are an amazing writer ... love your posts :-)
ReplyDeleteWOW! You are being too kind, Amrit. But, really, thanks! That means a lot! :)
Deletelingering... very nice
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteVery well done...short and crisp image ~
ReplyDeleteThanks, Grace! :)
DeleteVery beautiful haiku with great meaning!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Valli! :)
DeleteWonderful ~ love the meaning of your words ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Carol! :)
DeleteBeautifully carved :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Simran! :)
Deleteloved it! keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sohini! :)
Deletelove the haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susan! :)
Deletenice
ReplyDeleteThank you, Piphi! :)
Deletefrom fresh floral to potpourri. life cycle. lovely.
ReplyDeleteYes, Annie! Thanks! :)
Deletep.s. I found the syllable error and fixed it. Thank you!
Deleteclean. crisp. precise. yet touching and deep. awesome!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Ritu! :)
Deletethe scent, and the memory of beauty lost......images are painted so well with such minimal words...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Joanne! Glad you liked it. :)
DeleteI love the message of the poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Christine! :)
DeleteI don't think that there is a sense of loss as long as the fragrance lingers. Sometimes we are able to keep things alive just as long as we want to. I like the idealistic thought and the passion in this. :)
ReplyDeleteTrue, Archana! As long as the memories are alive in our hearts and we let the sparks speak to us, there is no such thing as loss. Thanks for appreciating. :)
DeleteIt's the lingering part that we remember...
ReplyDeleteMy Forget-Me-Nots
Absolutely! :)
DeleteLovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Madeleine! :)
DeleteHi Vaishali! :)
ReplyDeleteYou would be happy to know I have composed a poem on your say on ''Forget -Me -Not'' theme. Thank you so much for the sweet suggestion :)
Hope you like :)
http://myfriendshipsimran.blogspot.in/2012/07/allusion-in-silence.html#.UBVQoLRo20s
Simran, it's nice of you to give me some credit of it. But really, I'm glad you worked on the suggestion. Keep writing, my friend! :)
DeleteAlso, your poem is really romantic... like feelings of a lover written down on paper.
DeleteFirst time here,nice read.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gyanban! :)
DeletePowerfully evoked.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Judith! :)
Deleteexquisite
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gabrielle! :)
Deletei loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad! Thank you! :)
DeleteWow! simply amazing!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Aditya! :)
DeleteWell said :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ghazala! :)
DeleteA beautiful thought, Vaishali.. and a lovely message in it as well.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, a little too much punctuation...?
bloom withers
sooner or later -
scent lingers
would get a tone of reading to it perhaps.. reading the first two lines in one go, and concluding with the emphatic third :)
Nothing taken from the beauty of your thought though.. as MMT says, it is the scent that lingers :)
Perhaps, yes! Got your point, Leo, and it makes sense. Thanks for the suggestion... does me good! I'm here to learn and it's always good to have seniors give constructive feedback. Thanks! :)
DeleteBeautiful thought!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Katy! :)
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