Saturday, 20 July 2013

Time



 
Courtesy


shadows become one
time sealed in the first kiss
beside the fireplace


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34 comments:

  1. Unknown20 July 2013 at 15:20

    Very emotional and passionate Haiku. Nice!

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  2. Anonymous20 July 2013 at 15:31

    Very sweet! Nicely done.

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  3. Amit Pithadia20 July 2013 at 17:12

    very sweet...

    Bloggers Listing

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  4. Locomente20 July 2013 at 18:28

    Romantic and passionate...
    Full of love... leading to oneness...
    Beautiful...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/crazy-mind.html

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  5. kalpana solsi20 July 2013 at 20:52

    By the fire-place- so romantic.

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  6. kaykuala20 July 2013 at 23:23

    Isn't it wonderful, how sweet! Nicely Vaishali!

    Hank

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  7. Anonymous20 July 2013 at 23:53

    Very romantic :-)

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  8. Reading Pleasure21 July 2013 at 00:11

    Ow how sweet and romantic

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  9. Anonymous21 July 2013 at 15:11

    Sensual, romantic love it!

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  10. Ramesh Sood21 July 2013 at 16:14

    Oh, it gives a wonderful visual...excellently weaved three lines..great haiku..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  11. Susie Clevenger22 July 2013 at 05:04

    Love romantic...nice haiku

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  12. Unknown23 July 2013 at 11:33

    aha.. sahii hai :)

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  13. Jayashree Srivatsan23 July 2013 at 13:27

    Romantic and passionate

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  14. rallentanda23 July 2013 at 18:12

    Clever creative and beautiful!

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  15. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 20:43

    Ah I love this ~ time sealed in the first kiss ~ is a beautiful line x

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  16. Vaishali Jain24 July 2013 at 01:03

    Thanks so much, Rajneesh ji. :)

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  17. eyeography29 July 2013 at 11:20

    beautiful thought depicting a scene of love.. :)

    Check out my friend's hindi poetry.
    http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.in/2013/07/barfby-sunil-gahlot.html

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  18. Unknown7 August 2013 at 14:30

    beautiful

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