Cosmuse: Guardian

Monday, 2 September 2013

Guardian

I remember it,

the beginning of this tale

with your gentle touch.

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You are the

young hope in my heart.

You will live.

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In need of some light,

a selfish me looked up at you.

You shone brighter.

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15 comments:

Laurie Kolp2 September 2013 at 01:19
Nice... I especially like the second one!
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Leovi2 September 2013 at 03:04
Wonderful poem, beautiful love!
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kaykuala2 September 2013 at 05:51
Like the first! It's a lot of assurance! Nicely Vashali!

Hank
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Panchali2 September 2013 at 21:52
Amazing...I just love the second one, Vaishali!! Lovely set...
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Reading Pleasure2 September 2013 at 21:53
a fine set. The second one went to my heart
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Unknown3 September 2013 at 10:30
I agree with the other comments, the second one hits a chord. Very nice. Thank you.
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Simran5 September 2013 at 01:50
Enjoyed reading third one the most :-)
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Vishnu Keloth25 March 2014 at 16:15
beautiful...the last part especially...
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