the
young man
waits
before the setting sun
for
his mermaid
---
he
proposes her
with
land, water, and sky
as
witnesses
---
not
just a sand castle,
it was
her future she built -
had to
be perfect.
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Nicely penned. :)
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Deletebeautiful short & aweet keep writing
ReplyDeleteSure will. Thanks. :)
DeleteWith land . water and sky as witness. So beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kalpana. ^_^
DeleteYou know something ... this is the best haiku series you have written ... awesome yaar ... just loved it !!!
ReplyDeleteYay! Thanks, Amrit. :D
DeleteLovely...Vaishali nice to see you back......
ReplyDeleteSame here, Sreeja. And thanks. :)
DeleteSweet poetic tale...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Tarang. :)
DeleteThat is a sweet little story Vaishali :)
ReplyDeleteI didn't intend it to be a story, really. They're three different haiku. :) Thanks, Reshma.
DeleteVaishali, this passionate and profound Haiku. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Usha ji. :)
DeleteSweet story .
ReplyDelete:D Thanks, Jaish.
Deletelovely story here
ReplyDeleteThank you, RP. :)
DeleteVery beautiful words used! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bushra.
Deleteahh.. the beauty of it… and the suspense.. you keep the reply off!!
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