Typically, When I Think About Miracles, I Compose.
Great Vaishali...the second one is so lovely...next time when i watch stars I'll surely remember these lines.....
Aww sreeja! It's highly unlikely for me to watch the stars these days; glad I gave you something worth remembering. Thanks! :)
I like the second one as well. Nice haiku.
Thank you, rallentanda! :)
Well done Vaishali ... your stars really touch the skies :-)
Thanks, Amrit! Nice to hear that! :)
Good one ~ If I may suggest a slight tweaking on the first one:curious shapesagainst the dark summer night - unmatched beauty: stars ! Have a good day ~
Thanks for the suggestion, Grace! I appreciate it!I had considered the same earlier but didn't want to go with the colon; I changed the last line to the above then. :DHope you have a great weekend! :)
Wow. Well done - and the picture just enhances your words magically
Thanks, Stephen! :)
None indeed.. Well said..I enjoyed being here.. RS:)
Thank you, Sir! :)
Nice one :)
Thanks, purplemist! :)
'beauty unmatched' - the night sky with its ever-shifting lights is inspirational - has one thinking soaring thoughts
Thanks so much, Joanne! :)
Yes, if only it can happen all the time! Dreams have a way to be realized if pursued well and long enough! Wise words, Vaishali!Hank
Thanks, Hank! Rightly said! :)
Absolutely beautiful!
Thanks, Sharla! :)
"Dream till you land in the sky" -- WONDERFUL
Thanks, Judith! :)
Wonderful haiku!
Thank you, Madeleine! :)
I don't quite agree with the word beaut, but I like the thought overall :) Lovely one.
Could you please tell me why 'beaut' isn't the right word here, Leo? Would definitely like to hear from you. And thanks! It helps, you know! :)
Nice... short and sweet, yet gets the message across.
Thanks, Dark Knight! :)
Well done ...! Lovely haiku accompanied by a wonderful photograph.
Great Vaishali...the second one is so lovely...next time when i watch stars I'll surely remember these lines.....
ReplyDeleteAww sreeja! It's highly unlikely for me to watch the stars these days; glad I gave you something worth remembering. Thanks! :)
DeleteI like the second one as well. Nice haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you, rallentanda! :)
DeleteWell done Vaishali ... your stars really touch the skies :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amrit! Nice to hear that! :)
DeleteGood one ~ If I may suggest a slight tweaking on the first one:
ReplyDeletecurious shapes
against the dark summer night -
unmatched beauty: stars !
Have a good day ~
Thanks for the suggestion, Grace! I appreciate it!
DeleteI had considered the same earlier but didn't want to go with the colon; I changed the last line to the above then. :D
Hope you have a great weekend! :)
Wow. Well done - and the picture just enhances your words magically
ReplyDeleteThanks, Stephen! :)
DeleteNone indeed..
ReplyDeleteWell said..I enjoyed being here.. RS:)
Thank you, Sir! :)
DeleteNice one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, purplemist! :)
Delete'beauty unmatched' - the night sky with its ever-shifting lights is inspirational - has one thinking soaring thoughts
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Joanne! :)
DeleteYes, if only it can happen all the time! Dreams have a way to be realized if pursued well and long enough! Wise words, Vaishali!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks, Hank! Rightly said! :)
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharla! :)
Delete"Dream till you land in the sky" -- WONDERFUL
ReplyDeleteThanks, Judith! :)
DeleteWonderful haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Madeleine! :)
DeleteI don't quite agree with the word beaut, but I like the thought overall :) Lovely one.
ReplyDeleteCould you please tell me why 'beaut' isn't the right word here, Leo? Would definitely like to hear from you. And thanks! It helps, you know! :)
DeleteNice... short and sweet, yet gets the message across.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dark Knight! :)
DeleteWell done ...! Lovely haiku accompanied by a wonderful photograph.
ReplyDelete