It’s the first day
Of the next 31 to come,
The stories in my psyche
All race to get the lead.
I choose one to be penned.
For the August camp
@Camp NanoWrimo
Emotions bristle
Finding some rare corners
to start the marathon
that shall go on forever.
To touch some life, somewhere
I’ll add: it all began
@Camp NanoWrimo.
I’ll indite 50000 words
of a new life, a new world
They follow a trajectory
of love, life and loss.
My protagonist talks of her plight
While I enjoy the drive
@Camp NanoWrimo
The usual talkses go on
Till it’s late at night
I advise we bid farewell
To unite again in dreams
And none shall falter
Till we gather ‘round the gleam
@Camp NanoWrimo.
Written for: Kerry's Wednesday Challenge ~ Running the Brush
[It said, "Think of new ways to introduce poetical flair into every day examples of writing: the diary, the memo, the “to do” list, the email." This is a new form I've tried with the sign '@Camp NanoWrimo' at the end of each stanza.]
Shared with: Vice Versa - #9 and Three Word Wednesday
[Vice Versa gave - Follow/Lead & Usual/Rare]
[3 WW gave - Emotion, falter, touch]
How interesting! I really enjoyed the last stanza with the reunion in dreams.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa! :)
DeleteI too have those stories/poems that race to get the lead in my brain...interesting use of the form. I love opening up myself to something new.
ReplyDeleteWriters we are, eh? :D Thanks, Susie! :)
DeleteGood luck with the 31 day challenge. All nicely done Vaishali :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bren! :)
DeleteI like the way the repeated line makes this poem hold together. It was a good read. My head swirls at the thought of 50,000 words. Way to be brave!
ReplyDeleteHaha it's not that difficult if we are able to switch the inner editor off. Thanks for appreciating, Sherry! :)
Deletegood for you well done
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sheilagh! :)
DeleteYou have shared some interesting poetic ideas here! I enjoyed your words and thank you for participating in and supporting Vice/Versa!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Mary! Glad you liked it! :)
Deletebeautiful words!!! good luck for the contest
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Thanks, SJ! :)
DeleteWhat a culmination or shall I say a start there.. perfect..lines..
ReplyDeleteAnd none shall falter
Till we gather ‘round the gleam
@Camp NanoWrimo.
RS:)
Thanks SO much, Sir! I'm glad to hear from you again. :)
DeleteThank you, Syed! :)
ReplyDeletenice work.. thanks for reading my blog too
ReplyDeleteThank you and you're welcome! :)
Delete"I advise we bid farewell
ReplyDeleteTo unite again in dreams" - you are an awesome writer, and improving with every post ... good work :-)
Thanks a bucket, Amrit! We need to improvise and if that shows in our work, nothing like it, is there? :)
DeleteI second Green Speck....sooooo good Vaishali.....best of luck for nano....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sreeja! :)
DeleteEven I second Green Speck,, he wrote exactly the same lines that were ringing in my ears after reading this.. great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Sanhita! :)
DeleteU r writing for Camp dis month???
ReplyDeleteLOL We meet daily but I wsnt even aware of dat!! Nywz amazing poem. U did manage to bring out the daily routine in the poem.
Hey, Laxmi! Glad to see you here!
DeleteGoing for the Camp. Do join. Piorre and I share the same cabin as we did the last time.
And thanks for appreciating! :)