Saturday 3 August 2013

Beach


the young man
waits before the setting sun
for his mermaid

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he proposes her
with land, water, and sky
as witnesses

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not just a sand castle,
it was her future she built -
had to be perfect.



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24 comments:

  1. beautiful short & aweet keep writing

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  2. With land . water and sky as witness. So beautiful words.

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  3. You know something ... this is the best haiku series you have written ... awesome yaar ... just loved it !!!

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  4. Lovely...Vaishali nice to see you back......

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  5. That is a sweet little story Vaishali :)

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    1. I didn't intend it to be a story, really. They're three different haiku. :) Thanks, Reshma.

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  6. Vaishali, this passionate and profound Haiku. I loved it.

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  7. Very beautiful words used! Loved it!

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  8. ahh.. the beauty of it… and the suspense.. you keep the reply off!!

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    1. Hahaha. It's a never-to-be-revealed reply. Or maybe, it's not. :P

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