Saturday, 20 July 2013

Time





shadows become one
time sealed in the first kiss
beside the fireplace


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36 comments:

  1. Very emotional and passionate Haiku. Nice!

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  2. Very sweet! Nicely done.

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  3. Romantic and passionate...
    Full of love... leading to oneness...
    Beautiful...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/07/crazy-mind.html

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    1. Glad you liked it, Satya. Thanks. :)

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  4. By the fire-place- so romantic.

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  5. Isn't it wonderful, how sweet! Nicely Vaishali!

    Hank

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  6. Very romantic :-)

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  7. Sensual, romantic love it!

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  8. Oh, it gives a wonderful visual...excellently weaved three lines..great haiku..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  9. Clever creative and beautiful!

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  10. Ah I love this ~ time sealed in the first kiss ~ is a beautiful line x

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  11. beautiful thought depicting a scene of love.. :)

    Check out my friend's hindi poetry.
    http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.in/2013/07/barfby-sunil-gahlot.html

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