Wednesday, 31 July 2013

Threesome





a curve on her lips
fools the next jackass in town
conveniently 

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be not the one thought
that can rupture the silence
in a moment

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how a few colors
turn a blank canvas into
something splendid



22 comments:

  1. like the direction you took with the prompt.

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  2. Nice... I especially like the last one.

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  3. Wonderful, esp. haiku 1 and 2.

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  4. That blank canvas turned out to be a masterpiece.

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  5. Marvelous and perfectly expressed!! Applause!!

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  6. I super love these words my soul sister. :) Hats off to you. I envy people who can write haikus because it's one thing I couldn't do, for the life of me!!!! hahahaha Hope all is well with you and all the people you care about.... love and light sis

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    1. To you, too, sis. Thanks a ton. :D

      And, hey, you would be able to. Try for once. I'm sure I'll be the one applauding your haiku then.

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  7. never been much into haiku but the idea of expressing oneself in such few words is brilliant.. but one question.. why not be the word that ruptures the silent???

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    1. Thanks, Aersh.

      You took it the other way. I meant - don't be the person who can rattle a calm mind with his negativity. :)

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