I know not much about Haiku Vaishali except that I keep coming across it in blogosphere...So I dont think I can give any genuine comments here but I did give a shot at trying to understand what was being conveyed and it sounded beautiful :)
Do check out my older post on Lavani at Do check out my older post on Lavani at http://mumbai-eyed.blogspot.in/2012/06/our-world-lavani.html since you said you were inerested in Lavani.
A little story packed in three wonderfully crafted haiku. A nice symphony of words and images.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kristjaan! :)
DeleteA glimpse behind the curtain - I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad! Thanks a lot! :)
Deletebeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susan! :)
DeleteSometimes life is like this - no one understanding, but then there is the applause. It helps. Well done. I like your haiku very much.
ReplyDeleteTrue, it is so! And thanks a lot for the kind words, Ellecee. :)
DeleteBravo!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteYour haiku seems to capture the toll the symphony takes on the orchestra. Very inteeresting perspective
ReplyDeleteGlad you found it interesting! Thanks for appreciating! :)
DeleteNever tried Haiku but very interesting poem:>)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Sharla! :) Haiku is new to me too and I love writing in this form... quite challenging.
DeleteApplause is music to the ear when one has worked so hard. Nice take on this prompt!
ReplyDeleteTrue that, Barbara! Thanks! :)
DeleteFor all the hard work, there must be reasons! Nicely Vaishali!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you, Hank! :)
DeleteVERY NICE! You painted a complete picture for me.
ReplyDeleteGlad I could do that, Judith! Thanks for letting me know. :)
DeleteI know not much about Haiku Vaishali except that I keep coming across it in blogosphere...So I dont think I can give any genuine comments here but I did give a shot at trying to understand what was being conveyed and it sounded beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThere, you gave me a genuinely helpful comment. Thank you so much and do try writing haiku. As I said earlier, it's interesting and challenging. :)
DeleteWow ... lovely set ... you are indeed a great haiku writer :-)
ReplyDeleteThat means a lot, Amrit! Thank you! :)
Deletelovely and so thoughtful....loved it Vaishali....
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Sreeja! :)
DeleteThat title reminds me....... I have to practice my violin :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Go create some magic! :)
DeleteDo check out my older post on Lavani at Do check out my older post on Lavani at http://mumbai-eyed.blogspot.in/2012/06/our-world-lavani.html since you said you were inerested in Lavani.
ReplyDeleteSure! Thanks so much! :) On it! :)
DeleteNicely written. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Indrani! :)
DeleteApplause echoes.. loved it..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thanks a lot, Sir! :)
DeleteThanks a lot, Deepak! :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe the applause, if genuine, would be the biggest reward for their effort.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeletehttp://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/
Some don't always hear the the symphony in the same way...but we all need applause anyway..nice..
ReplyDeleteThat we all do. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Katy! :)
DeleteLoved it! Applause, applause and once again applause!
ReplyDeleteShort and crisp... cheers
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Ajeeth! :)
DeleteI would love to be a part of it, as an audience though. Enjoying symphony both in music and words is so satisfying. Very beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Saru! :)
DeleteVaishali, excellent effort. You have proved that such a great theme can be conveyed beautifully in a few lines!
ReplyDeleteMeans a lot, Sibi! Many thanks! :)
DeletePreety nice Haiku :) Loved the feel :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tanya! :)
DeleteGreat expression in less words
ReplyDeleteThank you, Suhas! :)
DeleteBeautifully done!!...Lovely set of haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Valli! :)
DeletesIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL :D
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Ghazala! :)
Deletelovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Navin! :)
Deletehmmmm but symphony is good to have in life :)
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Indeed! :)
DeleteLovely haiku Vaishali :)
ReplyDeleteSo, are you on a journey throughout this month?
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
A journey of exam prep, Jay! lol
DeleteThanks a lot! :)