Saturday, 26 January 2013

Rescue






caged bird –
sings a Rescue Me prayer
listeners praise the voice



Written for Haiku Heights

21 comments:

  1. Excellent...I absolutely loved this....

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  2. Very nice! I alway wondered what the caged bird sings ...

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  3. Strange how humans have a tendency to hear what they wish to hear in the music, but not the real words in the song! Lovely, poignant haiku!

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  4. beautifully written, but I wish the listeners would let him out of the cage!

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  5. Yeah, people don't dig into the deeper meaning of life. Beautiful haiku Vaishali. :)

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  6. There is deep meaning here. Nice metaphor. Or perhaps a bird is just a bird.;-)

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  7. Sometimes one comes upon a sad episode but applause unwittingly thinking it is fun. A caged bird is such a situation. Truly said! Nicely Vaishali!

    Hank

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  8. This says so much ... awesome !!!

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  9. A very true happening! It screams appear to us like melodious songs!
    Beautifully penned

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  10. My God! These lines are so intense! Lovely!

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  11. True, true, true of most in captivity and enslaved.

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  12. Wow! What a splendid thought! Very beautifully penned too, Vaishali!!

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  13. And I hope it is freed by the power of prayer. Great picture. Following you on GFC to. Great haiku for this week. :-)
    Eliz

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  14. The picture used is so apt for this one. Nicely penned Vaishali!

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